i already want to change up the format, a testament to my tendency to get bored quickly. i went back to my faber-castells instead of using a brush to ink and changed the panel pacing. i think i'm getting better at including text, i tend to want to omit it as much as i can because it gets in the way of the "real" art. however i'm slowly accepting speech bubbles as a compositional element and a way of guiding the eye around the page.
